Traveling to the Roman Empire
Have you ever thought about traveling to the Roman Empire? Well if you have here is some information that you might like to have.
If you have ever thought about going you could travel to a Roman Forum, the Roman Bathhouse, the Coliseum, a temple, or even a Roman Marketplace.
At the Roman Forum you could do lots of things like shop for clothing, get fast food, speak in front of crowds, hold a religious ceremony, or have a festival. At the Bathhouse you could bath in a cold tub, a hot tub, even swim in a pool. You can also buy things to eat while your there. At the Coliseum you could watch gladiators fight to the death, watch gladiators fight ferocious animals, or watch a race. That is one of the great places to be. At a temple you could go pray to the gods or have a ceremony held. And lastly, At the marketplace you could go buy lots of things from food to paintings to put in your house.
That is what makes the Roman Empire one of the places to be!
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Im not sure how, but I think you should change you intro to bring the reader in more.
ReplyDeleteIt's a really good piece. I think the intro is fine the way it is. I think you could add some more information about the history of it.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could put some more detail into it. There's no words that really grab my eyes. Otherwise, I like the order of things, and it's a really good poem.
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